Hi bloggers
yesterday we had Andy come in to our class and she got us to write a story and this is my story.
The master I fared the most was Captain Hard castle and he played football and he was slim as cardboard.
His legs were hard and as thin as ram legs his legs were the colour of mutin fat.
The colour of his hair was dark vermilion like blood. Captain Hard castle's mustach was the same colour as his hair.
His mustach was so perfectly curled that it would need a hard tooth brush to curl it up. His mustach went down over his mouth and it nearly went up to his ear.
Thanks for reading.
Kia ora Brooklyn,
ReplyDeleteGreat story! Did Andy inspire you to think differently about writing? I really like the descriptive writing, especially reading that Captain Hardcastle was as slim as cardboard, that made me laugh. I also liked that he would need a hard toothbrush to curl his moustache up! That is a great description and makes me imagine it in my head. Thanks for sharing your story.
Tania